I like the monochrome style of the background behind the artists face, you could make the photo bigger to fill up more of the page meaning that there will be less space under the title.
More text needs to be added e.g. e-mail address, record label logo.. I like the image but feel it needs to be bigger. Nice layout, simplistic yet effective.
I like the layout of text but I feel that you need to fill more of the whitespace that you have. I would also enlarge you image slightly.
please comment back on my draft digipak and poster design: https://maxjaysahilrayanlcm1617.blogspot.co.uk/2016/10/draft-digipak-and-magazine-advert-max.html
I like the monochrome style of the background behind the artists face, you could make the photo bigger to fill up more of the page meaning that there will be less space under the title.
ReplyDeleteMore text needs to be added e.g. e-mail address, record label logo.. I like the image but feel it needs to be bigger. Nice layout, simplistic yet effective.
ReplyDeleteI like the layout of text but I feel that you need to fill more of the whitespace that you have. I would also enlarge you image slightly.
ReplyDeleteplease comment back on my draft digipak and poster design: https://maxjaysahilrayanlcm1617.blogspot.co.uk/2016/10/draft-digipak-and-magazine-advert-max.html